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| + | == Weird wording == | ||
Why is everything worded so weirdly on this page? | Why is everything worded so weirdly on this page? | ||
For example, "your human avatar's..." sounds awkward and excessive. "your character's..." or "your avatar's..." would be better. | For example, "your human avatar's..." sounds awkward and excessive. "your character's..." or "your avatar's..." would be better. | ||
| − | Or "If a human should happen to visit on a day..." could be replaced with "If a player happens to visit on a day..." which is less verbose and less awkward sounding. | + | Or "If a human should happen to visit on a day..." could be replaced with "If a player happens to visit on a day..." which is less verbose and less awkward sounding. {{Unsigned|2606:a000:fc12:4800:1cb1:bd45:3ef1:22d3}} |
| + | :Hmmm...you're right. The whole section is written badly. I'll change a few words right now and add a rewrite template. [[User:Drago|<span style="font-family:Coustard;color:green">Drago</span>]] [[User talk:Drago|<span style="font-family:Coustard;color:purple">(talk)</span>]] [[File:Drago PC Villager Icon.png|25px]] 10:56, June 13, 2018 (EDT) | ||
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| + | == Times == | ||
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| + | Is anyone able to check the times for the Early Bird and Night Owl ordinance hours? [[User:AgentParadox|AgentParadox]] ([[User talk:AgentParadox|talk]]) 16:17, March 11, 2019 (EDT) | ||
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Weird wording[edit]
Why is everything worded so weirdly on this page? For example, "your human avatar's..." sounds awkward and excessive. "your character's..." or "your avatar's..." would be better. Or "If a human should happen to visit on a day..." could be replaced with "If a player happens to visit on a day..." which is less verbose and less awkward sounding. - unsigned comment from 2606:a000:fc12:4800:1cb1:bd45:3ef1:22d3 (talk • contribs)
- Hmmm...you're right. The whole section is written badly. I'll change a few words right now and add a rewrite template. Drago (talk)
10:56, June 13, 2018 (EDT)
Times[edit]
Is anyone able to check the times for the Early Bird and Night Owl ordinance hours? AgentParadox (talk) 16:17, March 11, 2019 (EDT)
