Editing User talk:Acnh Player (section)

== Avoid second-person writing ==

Hello, I've noticed several of your edits (such as [[Special:Diff/1128746|this one]]) include second-person writing in them (i.e. usage of the words "you" or "your" when referring to the player). Just want to let you know that the [[Nookipedia:Manual of Style#Grammary and usage|Manual of Style]] states that articles should never be written in the second-person (or first-person, for that matter); in any context that refers to the "player", they must be referred to as such instead of saying "you" or "your".

To give an example, instead of:
:"''You must buy 15 items to upgrade Tom Nook's shop.''"
It should be:
:"''The player must buy 15 items to upgrade Tom Nook's shop.''"
Alternatively, you can avoid referring to the player altogether if applicable. For example:
:"''A total of 15 items must be bought to upgrade Tom Nook's shop.''"

Hope my advice helped. [[File:Snapping Turtle NH Icon.png|25px]]'''The [[User:The Jacketed Terrapin|<span style="color: blue;">Jacketed</span>]] [[User talk:The Jacketed Terrapin|<span style="color: green;">Terrapin</span>]]'''[[File:Soft-Shelled Turtle NH Icon.png|25px]] 22:55, March 8, 2024 (EST)

:Okay I will do that [[User:Acnh Player|Acnh Player]] ([[User talk:Acnh Player|talk]]) 23:38, March 8, 2024 (EST)

:I will fix the poki article [[User:Acnh Player|Acnh Player]] ([[User talk:Acnh Player|talk]]) 14:04, March 9, 2024 (EST)

::Please read The Jacketed Terrapin's reminder again carefully. Some more of your edits today have included second-person writing including [[Special:Diff/1129040|this one]]. Thanks for your co-operation! [[User:Drago|<span style="font-family:Coustard;color:green">Drago</span>]] [[User talk:Drago|<span style="font-family:Coustard;color:purple">(talk)</span>]]    [[File:Drago PC Villager Icon.png|20px]] 14:16, March 10, 2024 (EDT)